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Our Story-Noelle L.
Nov 5 2009, 12:04 PM EST
three friends to go to an outer world and see a big time machine. They set it for a 4035years back and they get in it and pull a switch and when they walk out they see some palm trees and they see green, gras, flowers, tall trees also they see DINOSAURS! They all run out and hide in a cave. Next they see a glow into the cave and see the shape of a large creature glowing up the cave."what is it" shouted one of the kids. "i think it is a dinosaur!!!" shouted another kid. soon the monster was just a few feet away from them. They all see that it is a dinosaur. they slowly try to walk away but the giant monster started to growl at the small crowd. Soon it got louder and louder and the glow became stronger . After a while the giant creature started to walk closer. the children became more and more frightened. The dinosaur soon walked closer. The groan became louder. The monster was about 11 feet tall. the cold cave got colder as the monster came closer..."AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" shouted Jimmy (one of the kids). the dino had touched his head and started to pull on his hair. Soon the dino made a sound like it was humming Do you find this valuable? |
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1. RE: Our Story-Noelle L.
Nov 9 2009, 12:00 PM EST
This was added on By Lindsey C.Jimmy was scared and excited at the same time, was a dinosaur really pulling and playing with his hair and humming like a nice little pet and not a huge mean monster? "Hey guys he's not that scary, he's accutally pretty nice," said Jimmy. his two friends didn't know what to think of this they just stood in the cold, dark cave. after a while the dinosaur became fond of the other 2 kids and not just Jimmy. The dinosaur bent down infront of the kids and kind of nuged them on his snout, so the kids climbed on the dinosaurs big, bumpy nose and onto the head. Once again Jimmy and the others didn't know what to do or what to think of just go with what ever the dinosaur wants to do since their like 4 ft and he's11ft. "wow this is an amazing view" said one kid, the others agreed. Then the dinosaur started to take huge steps out of the cold, damp, dark cave and into the light with other creatues. Do you find this valuable? |
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2. RE: Our Story-Noelle L.
Nov 9 2009, 12:04 PM EST
The dino was humming? How is that even possible jimmy thought. Out of the corner of his eye he watched his two puzzled friends backing deeper and deeper into the cave, until...they were gone. Some friends! How could they just leave him alone with a humming dinosaur tugging on his hair in the middle of nowhere! He was beginning to wish that he had stayed home or been sick today so that this wouldn't have happened. The dino's tugging seemed to be growing stronger until he heard a voice, it sounded like a bird's and the dino ran away after it.
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