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Our Story Joe M
Nov 5 2009, 12:05 PM EST
There was a boy, who lived somwhere in Ohio named Mark Magiver. He was ten years old with five older sisters. He lived in an old house that was abanden befor the moved in four years later. The man who lived in the old house was an older man in his 60s that had bin living there since he was born, and one day when he was reading in his living room, he heard some lowd screeching noses, he went to his basement to check what was going on, and when he turned on the lights, woosh! a big shadow runs right by him, the man goes deeper in to the base ment, but as he is walking twords some light, he is hit. the man is hit by a large chunk of wood. As the man is knocked out, he is being controlled by the gost who hit him. then he wakes up in jail. Do you find this valuable? |
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1. RE: Our Story Joe M
Nov 9 2009, 11:57 AM EST
Not knowing what just happened he figured the ghost did something wrong. Scared and feeling weird he asked the guard what he did to get in here. the man ignord him and continued to walk down the hall.Mark was in his house and found some old files in the back of his closet. Not knowing what he was doing Mark read the files only to find out a man was murder in thishouse about 80 years ago. He was about to tell his parents about it but Mark thought he should keep quiet. he keeped reading to find out more info. Then he stopped, right infront of his eyes was the sentence telling him that the body's soul is still alive inside his house Do you find this valuable? |
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2. RE: Our Story Joe M
Nov 9 2009, 11:59 AM EST
A guard walked by him and he asked why he was in jail. " Why, because you stole a car and rode around the city for over a hour. We had to pull in front of you just to stop the car. 4 people died just from that, you all so had a gun and attempted to shoot 3 officers, stupidly you did not have any ammo. So you through it at a civilian. After you tripped and fell then we were able to stop you. You caused some damage man. But it wasn't me who did it I sware!! Yeah, thats what they all say
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3. RE: Our Story Joe M
Nov 9 2009, 12:00 PM EST
He found a plate with mushy food and a bottle of water on th cold cement floor of his prison cell. He asks a gaurd what he did and the gaurd said that he robbed a bank and killed three people. The next thing he knew he was on the floor. When he woke up he relized that he fainted. After he finished eating his mush he layed down on his thin cot and fell asleep. Imidetly he had the worst nightmare ever.
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4. RE: Our Story Joe M
Nov 9 2009, 12:05 PM EST
So the man looked for a guard but found no one then he looked around in his cell and found a normal sized wall or at least the size you can fit your head throw and saw that there was a guy in the cell next to him so the man said hey do you know how I got here? then the man kept saying hey answer me then the guy in the other cells head came clean off out of the middle of no where and bugs where in his neck and eeeeeew.Then the man woke up and noticed that it was a dream and he went down stairs noticed it was another cloudy day and put a hot pocket in the microwwave he ate it and thought about his dream and threw up as he was done throwing up he took a shower and brushed his teeth he went back down stairs and fead his dog he did the dishes and noticed that the window was breacking out of the middle of no where so he backed away and the window broke but he was a surviver of racoon city and was a former R.P.D. agent so he doged the glass easliy so he knew it had something to do with the basement so he got his blessed rosary went down stairs turned on the light and saw a dark figure of a ghost it attacked with a shadow sword but then the man's blessed rosary turned in to a holy sword so their they were in an epic battel and the man sliced the ghost and the dissaperd the man was bloody and sweaty so he took
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